i created a poem too{I love yours too though! ]
i call it The Ultimate
her eyes,though weary in a time of greif
look up to the sky then close in happpy reverance,
her aching face bows in thanks giving and speaks of happiness..
Happines?
where does this flower blossom if the soil like so much of the garden, is dead or dieing?
wait,if you look back, since the seeed was planted, you see it, yes the striving hands of the master,
the one true thing that stays, the one thing that lifted her when she fell
the one true thing that washed her hands of all the troubled times
The Ultimate thing that saved us all...Yes Ultimate.
The young girl gets off her knees where she'll go
we can't say,
only that where ever she goes the Master goes with her.