Forget-Me-Not Posted December 10, 2011 Report Posted December 10, 2011 (edited) My WillThe rocks were sharp and jagged as I stepped from off the pathThey sliced my feet and drew my blood to pain me in their wrathBut in my pride I clenched my teeth and walked the harder thereNot wishing to succumb to shame, nor guilt, nor sorrow bearSaid I, "My life is mine to live, twas given me to doI'm free to choose the way I will, the road I'll travel through."And so within myself I pushed to keep my chosen courseAnd at my sins tried not to look and suffer their remorseSo on the days and years they passed, I lived as I preferredBut in my vain ambitious trek my conscience often stirredAnd nagging deep within my heart a quiet voice did pleadThat I should walk the trodden path and let another leadI had the things the world could buy, I had its passion sureI had the things of lust and greed and pleasures to allureBut still, in all, I had a wound hid deep within my soulAnd in the solitude of dark its weeping took its tollThen all alone one night I cried, "Dear Lord, where might thou be?Please help me in my anguish, Lord, my soul yearns to be free!"And then as rain began to fall outside my window paneI felt as if it washed me through, no suffering did remainBut peace began to fill me up with love and tender careWith warmth, where once cold feelings lay, no longer to despairAnd now true joy, a thing I'd lost, welled up and me did fillInto my heart my Savior came and beckoned, "Do My will." Edited December 11, 2011 by Forget-Me-Not Quote
Mayer Posted January 20, 2012 Report Posted January 20, 2012 (edited) Thanks for sharing a perfectly penned and insightful piece of your poetry, it is very appealing, and I highly recommend you to try and get it published - you have the best of chances! Edited January 20, 2012 by estradling75 Quote
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