Tough Grits Posted January 22, 2013 Report Posted January 22, 2013 IronyHe is the lion. Gold-brown eyes survey his land. Arrogance abounds. The lazy lion. Forgetting who makes the kill. Not he; for he sleeps. The lioness stalks. She carries all the burden; Killing and birthing. The lion does smirk. On a throne he highly sits; Proud, lazy, and blind. Silent lioness. She sees what the lion can't... Her throne is taller. ~TG, November 2005 Quote
Ron65 Posted January 24, 2014 Report Posted January 24, 2014 Writing haiku is a tough ordeal and I feel you have done excellent with this one. Considering haiku is usually writing in isolation, yet you have mamaged to write five as a poem. Impressive. My style falls within open form poetry formats. Thank for sharing. Quote
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