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Originally posted by Faerie@Jun 21 2004, 08:27 PM

I uh..am writing a book...if you're really bored:

Orchids

Feedback is welcomed...I'm not finished obviously...

Oh my gosh Faerie,

That is great...but you shouldn't post it like that...you should have it published! or write for a newspaper as a series.....!

Seriously! You are good!

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Originally posted by Starsky+Jun 22 2004, 10:56 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Starsky @ Jun 22 2004, 10:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--Faerie@Jun 21 2004, 08:27 PM

I uh..am writing a book...if you're really bored:

Orchids

Feedback is welcomed...I'm not finished obviously...

Oh my gosh Faerie,

That is great...but you shouldn't post it like that...you should have it published! or write for a newspaper as a series.....!

Seriously! You are good!

Starsky..my brother wants me to get it published through his publishing company, but I have to finish it first!! I put it up for critiques and comments....I'm having a really hard time moving beyond chapter 10 though...driving me bonkers!! but thank you for your sweet words!!

and Snow...you have to start at the BEGINNING...not the end...lol

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OMG I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm going to print it and take it with on my trip, I will let you know what I think when I return on Tuesday ok......

From one writer to another.....Keep writing............................................Your awesome girl!!!!

Laureltree

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Originally posted by Faerie@Jun 21 2004, 08:27 PM

I uh..am writing a book...if you're really bored:

Orchids

Feedback is welcomed...I'm not finished obviously...

I want a signed copy when you get it published :D

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Originally posted by LaurelTree+Jun 23 2004, 09:11 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (LaurelTree @ Jun 23 2004, 09:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--Faerie@Jun 21 2004, 08:27 PM

I uh..am writing a book...if you're really bored:

Orchids

Feedback is welcomed...I'm not finished obviously...

I want a signed copy when you get it published :D

Me too....

One critic....maybe more 'setting' among the thoughts and conversations...

Like a discription of the suitcase....some history of where it came from or was last used....that kind of thing...you know?

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Sorry Faerie....

I was reading it...and when I read I like to get a picture of what is going on....so I like discriptions...Not a lot...just a few to orient my setting of where things are taking place. You have only once really given any detail about the main character....and that was several chapters in....about having long reddish hair...

I have enjoyed the drama though...it is very well written...and really pulls you into it....

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Sorry it took so long to respond, yesterday I had the worst time getting on this site.

Starsky, see..I've always been the opposite...I don't really like books that get bogged down in detailed description... I'd rather imagine what the characters look like, instead of processing someone else's description..but i'll look back over everything and see if i can throw in a few details for ya...

and uh..chapter 12 added :D

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LOL...don't change it on my account.....cause once I got past the first few chapters...I was so interested inwhat was going to happen, I didn't miss the discriptions... :D

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