Between day and dusk

[Average Joe]

I love this time of day

when the sky is faintest blue

and the sun lies a pale

yellow-white glow

above the distant trees

 

with shadows fading with the sun

into the coming dusk

and the air lies still 

save barest breeze

which stirs not bough but leaves

 

and its quiet now

when most have gathered in

from the hot, humid of the day

and the rise and fall of insect hums

is all of day's remains 

[pam]

I seriously really liked this one.

[Average Joe]

I seriously really liked this one.

 

Thank you very much. I may not be much for city life but I truly love nature.

[Palerider]

Very nice ... Good job

[Average Joe]

Very nice ... Good job

 

thanks, just trying to put into words what nature does for me :)

[Crypto]

I might be sharing this. I'll even attribute it to "Average Joe" 

[Average Joe]

I might be sharing this. I'll even attribute it to "Average Joe" 

 

lol, split the royalties with me