Finrock Posted March 25, 2013 Report Posted March 25, 2013 (edited) I lost my dreamas a childI lost my dream.It was robbed from metorn from me, beaten from meas a childit was taken.And I wandered and I wonderedI wandered in a wilderness that was lonelyand vast.Where did I go?Why was my life likethis?My dreams!Where were they?I never knew them,I just thought thatas a child,perhaps I had onedreamthat was mine, from me.I want to know meas a childso I can know my dreams Edited March 25, 2013 by Finrock Quote
Finrock Posted March 25, 2013 Author Report Posted March 25, 2013 Good morning Roseslipper. I hope you are having a great day! :)Did u write that?Yes.Regards,Finrock Quote
annewandering Posted March 25, 2013 Report Posted March 25, 2013 That gives a whole new twist on healing. Thank you so much for sharing! Quote
Ron65 Posted January 24, 2014 Report Posted January 24, 2014 An enjoyable free verse poem with nice echoing sound effects and half-rhyme. Much enjoyed. Quote
Forget-Me-Not Posted January 26, 2014 Report Posted January 26, 2014 Oh my! That was mournfully beautiful. Quote
Suzie Posted January 26, 2014 Report Posted January 26, 2014 Finrock, I was moved by your poem. Thanks for sharing. Quote
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